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Gift from a Pocket & a School Visit

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A Gift
Photo by Amy LV




Students - Today's poem is about a real boy named Andrew and the real pinecone that he gave to me.  Today I had the opportunity to visit Chenango Forks Elementary School, and at the end of the day, Andrew gave me a beautiful, sweet-smelling, prickly pinecone.  It will live on my desk to keep me company and to remind me of the kindness of new friends.

Have you ever made a fast friend or a friend who you only saw for a short time?  Sometimes we meet people who we only see for a moment, but their memory stays with us forever.  These are special moments to capture in writing.  You may wish to make a list of people you have not known for a long time - or only met once - and return to this list for writing ideas in the future.

Notice that today's poem is written in two stanzas with the second and fourth lines of each rhyming.  The secret to writing poems in this way is to make sure that the rhyming words make sense!  (I love the rhyme of hands/understands.)

I would like to extend much gratitude to kindergarten teacher Lisa Diamond, art teacher Debbie Abbey, and all of the teachers and children at Chenango Forks Elementary School who made me feel so welcome today.

Beautiful FOREST Bulletin Board by Debbie Abbey & Students
Photo by Amy...

Lisa Diamond's Magical Poetry Pocket Wall
Photo by Amy LV

In happy publishing news, I am now able to announce that I have a new picture book on the way. DREAMING OF YOU, a lullaby of a picture book about animals and children dreaming, will be published by Boyds Mills Press, with a date to be announced!

There may be other good news too, but I am not allowed to say yet...

Julie welcomes spring as she hosts today's Poetry Friday roundup.  For a spring in your own step and lots of links, visit her joyful celebration at The Drift Record.

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Octopus - Poems of Address & School Visit

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Oh, Octopus!
by Amy LV




Students - The idea for this poem came from a student at Eggert Elementary School in Orchard Park, NY.  I was teaching a writing workshop for upper grade students, and one student drew the nest from my writing pot.

Writing Pot
Photo by Brian Muffoletto

On the back of the nest were written the words FABULOUS FACT.  This meant that we were all to think of a favorite fact and let this fact inspire a poem or snip of writing.  One girl shared the fact that octopuses have three hearts, something I never knew.  This fact stuck in my brain, and this morning inspired today's verse to an octopus.  You'll see many facts about octopuses in this poem, and a little twist at the end. 

It is interesting to write poems of address, or poems that speak TO something. This might be an angle you wish to try with a topic.  Instead of writing ABOUT something, speak to it, as if it were right there with you. What would you say? And if you wish for it to answer, simply begin a new stanza and write a conversation poem.

On both Wednesday and Thursday of this week, I had the good fortune to visit Eggert Elementary for a big old poetry celebration.  Thank you many times over to principal Terry Tryon, the Eggert PTO, to teacher Brian Muffoletto and Tara Zimmerman, to parent Karen Nuwer, to art teacher Wendy Johnson and music teacher Rachelle Francis and to all of the teachers and students for making this a very magical visit.

I cannot recommend highly enough the beautiful song, "Birch are Soprano" by Dan Berggren, on his album TONGUES IN TREES.  My Wednesday morning began with a sneak listen to the Eggert chorus, who will be performing the first choral version of this song.  If FOREST HAS A SONG were a movie, I would hope for this song be the soundtrack.

Good choice!

Then, I feasted on expansive and amazing hallway displays of a variety of poems - by children and by me too.  Words and artwork everywhere. Students wrote poems on leaves, on animal silhouettes, and art teacher Wendy Johnson blew up pictures from FOREST and anthologies with my poems and invited children to make owls, flowers, and other beautiful art.

Teacher Brian Muffoletto filled the display case with my poem, "Kindness." 

Front Display Case
Photo by Amy LV
Squirrel Poet
Photo by Amy LV

Brian and teacher Tara Zimmerman made this enormous poetree!

Large Poetree with Students' Poems
Photo by Amy LV

FOREST and Me
Photo by Brian Muffoletto

Chickadee & Beautiful Birds
Photo by Amy LV

Poems on Silhouettes
Photo by Amy LV

The nurse and I had our photo taken by this big louse.

BIG Louse!  
Photo by Amy LV


Wow!  Thank you again to all all all of Eggert Elementary for such a wonderful two day visit.

Next Tuesday is April 1, April Fools Day, and the beginning of National Poetry Month.  This year I will not be taking a Dictionary Hike (2012) or Drawing Into Poems. Rather, I will write a whole collection of poem drafts, one each day of the month, live, for a new manuscript titled THRIFT STORE.  I'll share notes about process, drafts, audio, and pictures.  By the of the month, I hope to have a collection worth revising, and I invite you to watch me work.  I think I'll call it THRIFT STORE LIVE.

If you have not visited Sharing Our Notebooks lately, this week I am so happy to have Mary Poindexter McLaughlin with a story and her notebook-celebrating poem, "The Book." Visit to enjoy this tribute to notebooks, and comment to be entered into the Post-It note giveaway!  Next week I will welcome notebook keeper Alex McCarron into this space.

Today's Poetry Friday celebration is over at A Year of Reading with Mary Lee Hahn.  Visit her wonderful place for all kinds of poetry goodness as we get ready for April, National Poetry Month!

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Thrift Store - Poem #1 for April 2014

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Happy National Poetry Month!  This April 2014, I will be writing and posting a new THRIFT STORE poem, live, each day.  You'll see the drafts as they grow, my thoughts about writing a collection, revisions, and planning.  My hope is that by month's end, I will have a collection of poems worth revising and someday, worth submitting as a book.  

Each day I will tell you how long the poemdraft took me to write, and most days the I will have written it the day before.  (Disclaimer - Due to travel and work, there may be a few variations in actual writing time.)  I do this for me, for a month of writing fun, and also with a hope that it may be interesting to a few classrooms of young writers.  I welcome your comments and invite you to join me in taking one topic to explore for several days.

AMVETS in Depew, NY
Photo by Amy LV




Students - Here are my drafts from yesterday.  This poemdraft took about one hour to write, from 2:45pm - 3:42pm on Monday, March 31, 2014.  I began by sitting on my living room couch with a copy of X.J. Kennedy's THE BEASTS OF BETHLEHEM (1992),  illustrated by Michael McCurdy.  

Truthfully, I was a wee bit nervous on the eve of National Poetry Month, having committed to such a public project on a topic that matters dearly to me. But I took refuge in Kennedy's poem - "Mouse" - relying heavily on its rhyme scheme and meter to get me started.  If you study his poem, you will see where mine differs, and you will find the two lines of my poem that only have seven syllables instead of eight.  What do you notice about the way the lines of today's verse rhyme?

You may also notice that the second stanza of today's poem is simply a list.  If you have FOREST HAS A SONG, you will be able to find a couple of other poems with such embedded lists.  I like them.

Ready to Write (Note My Thrift Store Quilt)
Photo by Amy LV

Draft #1 Page #1
Photo by Amy LV

Draft #1 Page #2
Photo by Amy LV

As you look at my drafts throughout this month, you will notice that I have little habits, things I do over and over again.  I have writing routines that help me focus.  Here are a few of them:

1.  I cross out.  A LOT.
2.  I often write the alphabet to help me find rhyming words that make sense.
3. I write all over the place, and it's pretty messy.

Some of you may be wondering why or how I chose this topic?  Well, I am a thrift store shopper.  On any given day, half of what I am wearing comes from a thrift store.  Much of my furniture was purchased at thrift stores.  I love the stories and the mysteries and the hunt of shopping in thrift stores...not to mention the prices!

One of my favorite books is THOSE SHOES, by Maribeth Boelts, a book that celebrates thrift store shopping.


And just this winter, I had the experience of asking a six-year-old girl where she had gotten her beautiful vintage Barbie doll.  She would not tell me.  When she walked away, her teacher explained that this girl was embarrassed because her grandma had purchased the Barbie doll at a thrift store.  She did not want her classmates to know, and so kept quiet when I asked.  Later, when I shared with the class how I had built a great shoe collection thanks to my obsession with thrift stores, the young girl, all smiles, whispered in my ear, "That's where my doll came from!"

No one should feel embarrassed about shopping at thrift stores.  Thrift stores are fantastic!  So I choose to make them my April project.  Yay for reusing wonderful things!  Yay for saving money! Yay for stories!

Yesterday, I visited two thrift stores, taking many photographs to get me through at least the next week.  It was fun to look with this new eye, as usually my thrift store time is spent simply shopping.  Yesterday I looked for possibile poems, not just possible deals.

But, of course, I found some deals too.

New Old Plates, New Old Book, New Old Gloves - All Mine
Photo by Amy LV

To find all kinds of poetry happenings in the Kidlitosphere this month, visit Jama's cozy home on the web, Jama's Alphabet Soup.  She has a list!

Happy happy National Poetry Month!  May you find poems under your feet and in your heart, all month long.  

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Jammies - Poem #2 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Space Jammies
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Students - Today's poem took me about seventy minutes to write, not including the revisions made in typing.  (You can see a couple of notes about those changes in the first image below.) Some of you may be wondering if I ever draft poems on the computer.  Well, it does happen sometimes, but mostly I draft longhand.  I like the feel of a black felt tip moving across creamy paper.  I like the sound of it and the fluidity of moving my hand all around a notebook, drawing arrows and scribbling when it feels right.  I even like the sound of a turning page.  I like being able to see the footprints of my own thinking, even if I don't like a particular poem.  It's, well, my brain on paper, warts and all.

As with yesterday, I once again began with another's poem to inspire rhyme and meter.  This time I began with Ben King's "The Pessimist" from THE OXFORD BOOK OF POETRY FOR CHILDREN (1963) by Edward Blishen, illustrated by Brian Wildsmith.

But surprise!  I did not stay with the meter at all.  But you know what?  Having "The Pessimist" close gave me the confidence to begin. For me, beginning is the hardest part.  What if I don't come up with something?  What if the poem is terrible?  Sometimes having a friend poem nearby to hold my hand makes everything feel safer.

Draft #2 Page #1
Photo by Amy LV

Draft #2 Page #2
Photo by Amy LV

Draft #2 Page #3
Photo by Amy LV

What do you notice about these drafts?  Is there anything you see that you might wish to try?

The end of this poem mattered most to me and it took the longest time to write.  You can see evidence of this on the left hand side of both Page #2 and Page #3 of today's drafts.  Endings are important, and I always think long and hard about them.  This one almost had a circular ending, but then...it didn't.

I am very grateful to Anastasia Suen and Shirley Duke for their fabulously rich article in LIBRARY SPARKS about how to use my book, FOREST HAS A SONG, as a STEM resource.  You can view their three page article by cutting, pasting, and clicking the file below.

file:///C:/Users/AM/Downloads/38-40%20STEM_ForestSong_apr14%20(1).pdf

Teachers - Please know that I continue to share one favorite poem (not by me) at The Poem Farm Facebook page for each day of 2014.  I also post many interesting links to daily events and news throughout National Poetry Month at that page and on my Twitter page.  Don't forget to visit Jama's Alphabet Soup for a list of many things happening this month!

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Jar - Poem #3 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Canning Jars
Photo by Amy LV




Students - Each day of this month, I will choose which poem to write based on the thrift store photograph that strikes my fancy that day.  Yesterday it was these empty jars.  There they are...empty...but what did they once hold?

Sitting in a Greek diner, I began writing in prose.  Rather than beginning with another's rhyme and meter as I'd done the two previous days, I decided to just start writing in sentences to see where my pen would lead.  

Before I knew it, I was writing in the voice of one jar.  This happens to me sometimes; I almost feel like I become an object or an animal.  It is odd and cool at the same time.  And I think it happens simply because I write a lot.  Maybe it just gets old to write as oneself all of the time and so these other beings emerge.  

Draft #3 Page #1
Photo by Amy LV

As I wrote as a jar, a repeating pair of lines emerged.  Actually two repeating pairs of lines emerged.  Can you find them?

If you looked carefully, you found that these two pairs of lines each occur twice:

It's been fifteen years
since I held jam.

We jars are made
for holding things.

Why?  Why repeat words and lines instead of coming up with new words and lines?

Well, there are a couple of reasons.  One is that readers' ears just like repetition.  It is comforting and musical to hear the same sounds over and over again.  The repetition at the beginning and ending of this poem brings it around, full circle.

Also, though, repetition stresses an important idea, here the passage of time, and too, the great importance this jar finds in the act of holding.

Draft #3 Page #2
Photo by Amy LV

I find it refreshing to write in new places from time to time and may visit the Towne Bistro again.  (No one seemed to mind me reading out loud to myself in the corner.)

Today I am excited to welcome my colleague, teacher Judy Perkins and her second grade poets from Wellsville Elementary School in Wellsville, NY.  I have the good fortune to work with Judy and her team, and so it was a treat to receive these warm and joyous poems from her students last week.  Let us welcome these young writers and their wonderful teacher.  Thank you for helping us celebrate National Poetry Month!

(There seems to be a problem with flickr at the moment.  Please try back to see the slideshow!)


There are still a few days left to leave a comment and thereby enter my giveaway of Post-It notes over at Sharing Our Notebooks.  Don't miss Mary's notebook poem post!

Tomorrow is the first Poetry Friday of National Poetry Month 2014, and I'm hosting here.  I look forward to seeing you and rounding everyone up.
                                                    
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Poetry Friday is Here & Baseball Glove - Poem #4

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IS HERE!

Happy Happy First Poetry Friday of National Poetry Month.  I am so glad you stopped by.  Today is Day #4 in my series of 30 April poems and process notes all on the theme...

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Baseball Glove
Photo by Amy LV




Students - Yesterday I was a nervous writer.  See, writing can make me anxious.  A blank page can make me feel scared, and I can do a thousand things to avoid getting started.  Fortunately, dogs understand moods, and so a dog can truly be a writer's best friend.  Below you can see my wonderful muse dog Cali: just yesterday: telling me to get writing, napping on my notebook, cuddling the page as I think, napping as I revise.  Her warm furry body made me believe I could get started after all.

Cali Collage
Photos by Amy LV

At first I thought that today's verse might begin with the sound of the ball hitting a glove.  Then I thought it might be about how broken in the mitt in this photo is - about a child breaking in a glove.  This is when I stood up and walked to the computer to do a bit of research and when Cali decided to plop herself right on my notebook.  Shortly after, I decided not to write about breaking in a glove.

I considered using one of my favorite meters from "A Jellyfish" by Marianne Moore (you can see the hash marks in the first photo below) but abandoned that idea quickly.

Baseball Glove - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

Then, just writing along, I came up with the idea of every baseball glove getting that one moment of glory.  That was the spark, the line to follow.

It takes such a spark to really get me moving.  A spark just lights.  Perhaps my fear is simply fear that a spark will never really light at all.  The fear that my mind's kindling is...well...wet.

Today's poem took about seventy-five minutes to write, not including the revision at the computer screen which involved the fun movement in stanza 4.

About the rhyme, "story"/"glory" - yup.  One of my favorite rhyme pairs.  I learned it in BLESS US ALL: A CHILD'S YEARBOOK OF BLESSINGS, by the wondrous Cynthia Rylant.

And "winterwaits" - yup.  Another wordsmush.

Baseball Glove - Draft Page Spread #2
Photo by Amy LV

One last process note.  Recording these poems really helps the writing.  You see many cross outs in my drafts, and I have told you that I read my poems aloud many times.  But in a final recording, I often hear one glitch that sends me back to the keyboard.  This happened last night.  In the second stanza, you now read the word "saves." Originally it read "saved." Listening to my own voice, I heard the tense switch and it made me crazy as this is number ten in the Twenty Most Common Errors in College Writing. Now it is consistent: gets, saves, has, looks.

In happy news, I am truly tickled to be part of a conversation with Stephanie Parsons and her fourth grade writers over at The Learning Laboratory. Stephanie, author of so many books I admire and co-author with Lucy Calkins and me of Poetry: Big Thoughts in Small Packages (Heinemann), is exploring poetry with her students in many beautiful ways, and I know I will learn a lot from them.

There are still two days left to leave a comment and thereby enter the Post-It Note giveaway over at Sharing Our Notebooks.  Don't miss Mary's notebook poem celebration.

And tomorrow, please return here to enter a giveaway for two books: one copy of THE POETRY FRIDAY ANTHOLOGY FOR SCIENCE compiled by Sylvia Vardell and Janet Wong and one copy of my own FOREST HAS A SONG. Each Saturday of April, I will offer this same giveaway here, for eight books in all.  Thank you to Sylvia and Janet for your generosity.

At last!  It's time for....the Poetry Friday posts!  Please leave a few words about your post along with a direct link in the comments, and I will add everyone's information all day, old school!  For those of you who are new to this community, we meet and share poetry links every Friday, and all are always welcome - to read, to link, as you wish!

Morning Posts

Afternoon Posts

Evening Posts

Weekend Posts

Thank you very much for visiting The Poem Farm today...I wish you a joyful journey all around the Kidlitosphere, today and throughout the month.

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Clock - Poem #5 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Clocks
Photo by Amy LV



Students - I have decided to write non-rhyming poems on day 5, 10, 15, 20, 25, and 30 of this month's project.  Today you do hear chime/time, but this is mostly a free verse poem, something I wish to become stronger at writing.

Today's poem took thirty-three minutes to write, one of the shortest this month so far.  The spark that lit it was the idea of how frequently a clock face is looked at...until it stops working.  Then no one looks.  How strange that change must be for a clock.

My drafts for this poem are below, and I do realize that looking at these may be rather uninteresting.  They look the same each day: crossouts, arrows, lists of rhyming words, more crossouts.  But I promised to include them, and so include them I will.  (Mark, my husband, laughs that I could put the same ones up each day and no one would likely notice!)

Clocks - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

In these handwritten drafts, you see the word still in the last stanza instead of motionless, which appears in the typed version.  The reason for the change is that as I typed, I knew I had recently typed still.  And so I did - in "Baseball Glove" - yesterday.  I changed it as I do not like repeating the same words throughout a collection.  If it is supposed to be repeated, yes.  But if the repetition is not intentional and does not add anything to the collection, then out it goes.

Clocks - Draft Page Spread #2
Photo by Amy LV

One thing I always revise and edit are the words the/a/these/this.  It is often best not to include these words at all, but sometimes such little words are necessary.  It matters greatly to me which one I use when, and so often I go back and forth, forth and back until each choice sounds just right to my listening ear.

Last night I wrote in a coffee shop with Mark  (he was doing taxes).  Our daughter was at a movie in town, and so we listened to Tim Weir play his guitar and sing at Taste in East Aurora, NY as we worked.  Here are the sounds of busy coffee shop writing.




And now...it's giveaway time!

Through tomorrow - Sunday - you may still leave a comment and thereby enter my Post-It Note giveaway over at Sharing Our Notebooks.  Don't miss Mary's notebook poem celebration.

And today, I offer a giveaway of two books here: one copy of THE POETRY FRIDAY ANTHOLOGY FOR SCIENCE compiled by Sylvia Vardell and Janet Wong and one copy of my own FOREST HAS A SONG. Each Saturday of April, I will offer this same giveaway here, for eight books in all.  Thank you to Sylvia and Janet for your generosity.  Please leave a comment below, and I will draw two names next Thursday evening to be announced next Poetry Friday!

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Orange Boots - Poem #6 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Orange Boots
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Students -  Yesterday afternoon, after visiting the Buffalo Small Press Book Fair with my daughter Georgia and friend Karla, we visited a thrift store in downtown Buffalo, NY.  I took a few more thing-pictures to have on hand for this week's writing.  Later in the evening, I drove Hope to a sleepover, and on my drive home, I thought about all of these thrift store pictures.  Which one would be next?

The boots!  The boots!  They shouted to me.  (I've been looking forward to them all week.)

And guess what?  I do not have paper drafts to share with you today.  The reason is that I began this poem in my head, driving, and then when I got home...I rushed to the computer to write the first four lines, still fresh in my head.  It was too scary to leave the poem and it, well, mostly poured out in a rain of bootjoy!  Sometimes this happens; writing just comes.  I like the feel of this poem; it reminds me of when I feel simply happy about a colorful new/old object.

In case you were wondering, usually I would not use the word really over and over again in a poem.  I did this on purpose in today's verse, to add to the childlike feeling of enthusiasm.

One thing that truly matters to me in a rhyming poem is that the rhyming words make complete sense, that the words are meaningful.  I never want you to read one of my poems and say to yourself, "Well, Amy kind of forced THAT rhyme." If you ever say this to yourself, would you please tell me?  (Real friends do that, you know.  They also tell you when you have spinach in your teeth.)

Last year at this time I wrote a wordsmush poem about red boots.  Who knows?  Maybe I am destined to write a color boot poem each year of my life.

Throughout today you may still leave a comment and thereby enter my Post-It Note giveaway over at Sharing Our Notebooks.  Don't miss Mary's notebook poem celebration.

And in yesterday's ("Clock") post, I offered a giveaway of two books here: one copy of THE POETRY FRIDAY ANTHOLOGY FOR SCIENCE compiled by Sylvia Vardell and Janet Wong and one copy of my own FOREST HAS A SONG. Each Saturday of April, I will offer this same giveaway here, for eight books in all.  Thank you to Sylvia and Janet for your generosity.

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Fine Antique Plates - Poem #7 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Students - Today's drafts were written in the car.  Our family was going visiting, and so I wrote from the passenger seat.  You can see that the minutes of notebooking tally up to thirty-five, but this poem did take longer.  I spent a lot of time, eyes closed, just thinking and not timing myself at all.  Daydreaming the poem into life.  I also spent a lot of time playing with this poem in the typing stage.  In fact, these last two stanzas did not appear until I typed.

For today's verse, the fun came  in imagining walking around the rims of plates. This was my spark.  And then, making the flowers disappear...well that just made me giggle a bit.

Challenges included finding spring flowers with the correct number of syllables. This sent me to a bit of research as I didn't want to include late summer or fall flowers at all.

You may have wondered why those last two lines are so short, shorter than the rest of the non-flower lines.  I did consider keeping as one line.  But somehow, the punch line of the dishes being "simply white" felt like more fun with a longer pause.

Here are today's drafts.  You can see that I spent a little time trying to decide which object to choose.

Fine Antique Plates - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

Fine Antique Plates - Draft Page Spread #2
Photo by Amy LV

Did you notice that the dishes in today's poemphoto are the same dishes as those in the THRIFT STORE LIVE logo?  

Yes.

I bought them.

March 31, 2014 Shopping Cart - AmVets
Photo by Amy LV

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Navy Uniform - Poem #8 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Navy Jacket - Found by Georgia LV
Photo by Amy LV




Students - Last Saturday, my daughter Georgia and our friend Karla went to a thrift store in downtown Buffalo, NY.  It was one I had never been in before, and Georgia found the Navy uniform from today's verse. Last night that uniform talked to me, and this poem tells what it had wanted to say for a long time.

From the drafts and times below, you can see that I spent about thirty minutes in my notebook again and then shifted to typing.  It is quite interesting for me to look at these draft pages, to see where the crossouts land and the good lines stay.

This poem is a mask poem, or a poem in which the writer writes in the voice OF something else. Those of you know my work know that this is something I love to play with, imagining that I actually AM something else.


If you are interested in writing rhyming poetry, I strongly recommend getting yourself a good rhyming dictionary and/or using RhymeZone.  Both book and online source will give you so many words that your choices will feel unlimited.  Do remember that rhyme is only good if the meaning is strong and clear.

You may see that even though I use both dictionary and online source, in the drafts above, I still  love making lists of possible rhymes. The exercise of writing out the alphabet and going through each letter is tedious but so interesting.

Please don't miss the wonderful post over at my other blog!  Seventeen year old writer, Alex McCarron, shares her journals, index cards, and process over at Sharing Our Notebooks.  Thank you, Alex!

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Bicycle - Poem #9 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Bicycle at The City Mission
Photo by Amy LV




Students - Today's poem took a bit of time to write, and I kept circling around it like dog trying to settle into a bed.  I was home writing steadily, but it was slow.  You can see my beginnings here, not much that remained in the poem at all.

Bicycle - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

Then, below, you can see where things got going.  The idea of a bicycle dreaming appealed to me.  I had to go back, though, to see if any of the other thrift store objects dreamed.  Nope.  Just the boy in his old fuzzy footie jammies.  So I decided to allow the bike to dream.

This is something I am finding myself paying close attention to this month - not just each poem on its own, but each poem in concert with the others.  I do not want to use the same words or the same rhyme schemes over and over.  Today's poem almost ended with "new" - but then yesterday's poem about the Navy uniform used "new." So I wrote another and another ending.

Bicycle - Draft Page Spread #2
Photo by Amy LV

Yesterday I videotaped some of my writing process.  I am not sure there is much to learn from this, but I found the exercise both intimidating and interesting.  It was a little scary to write on camera, and I stopped the video every few minutes so that the clips would not be too long.  I did not keep this up throughout the whole writing session, but I did capture the sense (and the sound) of almost four minutes of being inside my writing head.  

If you choose to watch this clip, you will see me writing the left side of the page you just read above.



Below, these last pages are simply working on the ending.  Once again, this takes me a while.

Bicycle - Draft Page Spread #3
Photo by Amy LV

And guess who helped me write again?

Cali!

Cali Under My Desk
Photo by Amy LV

Please don't miss the wonderful post over at my other blog!  Seventeen year old writer, Alex McCarron, shares her journals, index cards, and process over at Sharing Our Notebooks.  Thank you, Alex. 

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"Dancing Shoes" - Poem #10 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Students - It's a free verse day, just like all multiples of five of this month.  "Clocks" on Day #5 was the first free verse poem of the month, and the next one will be on April 15.  I find that setting such challenges for myself helps me to stretch and push myself to try things that I might normally not try.

You will notice, though, that there are still a couple of rhymes hiding in here.  Can you find them?  I was not trying to rhyme this time, but sometimes...when you do something regularly...it just sneaks in on its own.

I plan to read some more free verse poems this week, to get the sound and feeling of fine free verse inside of my heart and writing head.

Dancing Shoes - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV


And now, it's time for a...


It is an honor today to welcome Vida Zuljevic, a teacher from the former Yugoslavia who learned English after coming to the USA as a refugee with her family in 1996. Vida earned her BA, MA, and Ed.D. in Education at Washington State University and has worked as a Library Media Specialist for thirteen years.  In her home country, Vida is a published writer of articles in professional education journals as well as the book, CUDESNI SAN (MIRACULOUS DREAM), a collection of short stories for children.  Her self-published, first book in English, WHEN I WAS ALMOST FIVE, tells, in free verse, the story of the beginning of war in the former Yugoslavia seen through the eyes of her then-five-year-old daughter.  A poetry lover from very young age, poetry was a crucial part of Vida's education in former Yugoslavia so it became a part of her being.

Read on to learn some beautiful ways to explore poetry with joy and zest.

Poetry Activities 
at Robinson Elementary School in Pasco, Washington
by Vida Zuljevic

Being a poetry lover ever since I was an elementary school student in my native country, former Yugoslavia, continuing to be one ever since I started teaching about 40 years ago and again after coming to the U.S. and starting to teach here and exploring American children’s poetry more in-depth, I find it an inseparable part of my everyday life (personal and professional), and I think that the benefits for students of using poetry in the classroom, no matter the level, are multifold. I am very thrilled with this opportunity to share some insights about the poetry writing activities I have been doing with my students at the two elementary schools in Pasco, WA , since continuing my teaching career in the U.S., for more than 13 years now.

Those activities, for example, include:
  • Poetry and Puppetry Club, where students are involved in reading various poems, choosing some of them and adapting them for puppet performances
  • Poetry Friday Restaurant during the month of April during lunch break in the library, where student hosts “serve” poetry books of guests’ (their peers’) choice, after which the guests, after reading several poems for themselves,  choose one to “serve” to all guests by reading it aloud in front of others
  • Poetry Slam in April where students tell me in class what day they will be performing poems of their choice, and other students voluntarily come to listen and support them; 
  • Poetry Blog with a second-grade class
  • Publishing students’ poetry regularly in the local newspaper, throughout the school year
  • Annual Poetry Contest
  • More...

For this post, I’d like to describe our Annual Poetry Contest, a school-wide activity I run every year (for seven years now). This year, we had 409 poems turned in! Just as the school year begins, in September, I start promoting poetry among the students. They are encouraged to read and write poetry and turn in their poems during the month of November. Then, during the month of December, my colleagues (usually five or six other teachers, among whom at least three have a bilingual background) and I evaluate the poems turned in and choose 12 for the poetry calendar and 33 for the Poetry Book.

From the beginning of the school year, I bring in wonderful poetry by Janet Wong, Joyce Sidman, Ralph Fletcher, Amy Ludwig VanDerwater, Nikki Grimes, Pat Mora, Francisco Alarcon, Gerry Soto, Langston Hughes, Lee Bennett Hopkins, David Harrison, and others  to my students’ attention on a daily basis.  I read to them, they read to themselves, they share with their peers, or we do whole-group activities around the poems they bring in or that I choose with a certain goal in mind. 

With this poetry immersion in the library and great support of several colleagues in my school, poetry became a part of our life here at Robinson Elementary. Before November, I teach poetic forms and figurative language to 2nd to 5th grades with lots of modeling and reading of exemplary poetry, especially for younger students. It seems to me that this way, students get the confidence they need to embark on the journey of writing poetry and exploring it eagerly. I also teach revision skills, which are a crucial part of becoming a writer. I use some strategies from Georgia Heard’s THE REVISION TOOLBOX: TEACHING TECHNIQUES THAT WORK.

With K-1st grade students, I mostly do whole-class activities with poetry, like chanting nursery rhymes, reading poetry as an opening activity of every class, pointing to rhythm, wonderful words, rhyming words, etc.  During the month of November, we write a lot of class poems about families, pets, community (school, doctor, teacher, fire fighter), nature, and such. I serve as their scribe. We have a lot of fun, and I turn these poems in for the poetry contest as their class poems.

One important aspect is that students are allowed to write in English or Spanish, whichever language they feel more confident in. That option is another support that my students really respond to very positively because our school serves a student population (900 students) that is 90 percent Spanish-speaking and that has 71 percent in the bilingual transitional program.

Once the poems are evaluated and the best ones chosen, I call their authors to illustrate them, and I send them for publishing, with each poem and its illustration gracing one month of the calendar. I usually use Lulu.com for publishing the Poetry Calendars because they have reasonable prices and discounts starting at 15 calendars ordered ($9.95/calendar), but of course, there are other places to publish the calendars as well. Then, when the calendars arrive, I call the winners to present to them a copy of the calendar, a poetry book (if I have funds to buy them or if I get enough donations), a pencil, and a bookmark, and usually I treat them with an ice cream party. Last year, our Poetry Calendar winners (12 of them) received a copy of DECLARATION OF INTERDEPENDENCE, which Janet Wong generously donated to them. Also, the winners are invited to our regular Young Authors’ night where they share their poetry. (In the library, of course!)

The book publishing takes more time. I order a kit from Studenttreasures.com, a publishing company, and it takes a lot of coordination with classroom teachers to get the illustrations done. This year, our second poetry book will be published in April, and the students and I are very excited. We will get one free book for the library, and the parents can order their copies at the time I send the kit back for publishing.

Once we have our book in hands, we’ll celebrate it with reading poems from it every day as the authors come to the library at their regular library class time. This celebration of our own poets and their work sparks an interest and motivates other students to think “poetry!” evidenced by a regular spike in circulation of poetry books and by many new poems being  turned in to me. I usually send these poems to the local newspaper, where they are regularly published.

Also, from this year, I included a “Promising Poet Library Writing Award” to give to five students who showed advanced poetry-writing skills and who are interested in poetry reading, writing, performing, and promoting poetry among their peers. I awarded them with certificates, poetry books, and notebooks for writing their poetry. This year, Amy sent two copies of her FOREST HAS A SONG as a donation, and I bought A LEAF CAN BE… by Laura Purdie Salas and WHAT THE HEART KNOWS: CHANTS, CHARMS, AND BLESSINGS and RED SINGS FROM TREETOPS -- A YEAR IN COLORS by Joyce Sydman.

"I read  it because it's beautiful," says Karen Morrow Durica, and I cannot think of anything more beautifully said about poetry.  I just paraphrase it "I LOVE it because it's beautiful." That is my "motto" with my students. I hope to develop that sense of poetry in them. I want them to  read and write poetry throughout their lives because poetry is beautiful.

I thank Amy for giving me an opportunity to share about this activity, and if any teachers or parents reading this post need more information or would like to know more about any of the activities mentioned here, I would be more than happy to answer any questions.  Contact me via e-mail at pravopis2000 at yahoo dot com.

Here are a few winning poems from 2014:

Fire, Fire!
By Jazmin V., Grade 4
((Recipient of Promising Poet Library Award 2014)

My cousin, my brother and I
Were playing.
Suddenly, BIP,BIP,BIP!
FIRE! I shouted.
The fire began moving so fast.
My father ran downstairs. CRASH!
We heard broken glass falling and
Daddy ran back with the fire extinguisher.
My mother called 911!
We ran downstairs, scared , terrified
Especially because my mother
Had a broken leg and could not move fast.
The ambulance, cops and the fire truck
Wailed in there in minutes.
THANK YOU FOR SAVING US!
Now, we live at my grandma’s house
While she is in Mexico.
The most important thing is
That we all are safe.

Illustration by Jazmin V.


Poems
By Mariah M., Grade 3
(Recipient of Promising Poet Library Award 2014)
          
People love writing poems
On a sunny day, on a rainy day, and always. I’m
Excited about my poems. I LOVE writing poems, too.
Marvelous and lovely
Splendid!


Fall
By Mariah M., Grade 3
(Recipient of Promising Poet Library Award 2014)

Falling leaves
Autumn leaves
Letting sunlight shine through
Looking outside-autumn magic!


Spaghetti
By Moises P., Grade 3
(Recipient of Promising Poet Library Award 2014)

Plates full
Eat, yum
Gobble, gobble
Spices, sauce
Meatballs in my mouth
Slurp, yum, burp
Finished!
Get some more
Gobble, gobble, gobble!



My Brother
By Julian S., Grade 2

Tall, smart
Eating, studying, training
My brother is in the Army
Soldier


 Nieve
Por Joanna C., Grado 5
(Recipient of Promising Poet Library Award 2014)
        
La nieve es blanca
Es como polvo magico
Callendo, lentamente
Callendo, suavemente
     En el suelo.


Feliz
Por Joanna C. Grado 5
(Recipient of Promising Poet Library Award 2014)

Feliz, Feliz siempre estoy
En la mañana Saludos doy
Luego desayuno
Impresionada estoy
Zapatos nuevos me pongo hoy.


Animal
By Javier U., Grade 4

Strong, mighty
Walking, pulling, eating
Ferocious as a tiger
Oxen


Promising Poet Library Writing Award 2014 recipients 
Mariah M. and Joanna C. with with Vida Zuljevic

For me, it is a pleasure to keep this blog as it gives me the opportunity to learn from teachers, students, and librarians like Vida Zuljevic.  Thank you!

I would also like to thank the wonderful students, teachers, adminitrators, and parents at Klem North Elementary School in Webster, NY, for a delightful school visit yesterday.  I am still thinking about your poems and our laughs.

Please don't miss the wonderful post over at my other blog!  Seventeen year old writer, Alex McCarron, shares her journals, index cards, and process over at Sharing Our Notebooks.  Thank you, Alex. 

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Suitcase - Poem #11 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Students - Today my writing squeeezed into a small amount of time at the end of the day.  It was a busy and lovely day, and at the end of it...I was ready to sleep!  But no, it is Poetry Month, so write I did.  Instead of turning to my paper notebook last night, though, I thought in my head for a bit and then played with LiveTyping as you can see below.  I am sharing two of the "enlivenings" - the two I thought would be the most interesting to watch.

Can you see how I wrote the last line of the poem before the rest of it. I just liked that idea of the suitcase loving visiting Grandma more than visiting any other place in the world.  And so I just kept working and working the lines. 

Suitcase  Every time they open me I wonder wher
You can see below how I decided that the poem should be in the past tense. When a writer decides on the tense of a poem, it's usually a good thing to keep that tense the same all of the way through.  I started with present tense but switched to past tense when I realized that this suitcase was not living with the same family anymore.

Suitcase  Every time they opened me I wondered
You might want to try LiveTyping yourself.  It's free and easy and lets you look back at your own process in an interesting way.  While I usually do not write on the computer, I do sometimes, and I like looking back at this.

Yesterday I was lucky enough to have author and librarian Vida Zuljevic sharing a Poetry Peek at The Poem Farm!  Please stop by there to read all about the many wonderful ways she celebrates poetry with students.  You will be delighted by her students' poems, and I know that they would love to read your comments too.

The winner's of last Saturday's book giveaway are:
FOREST HAS A SONG - Bridget Wilson
THE POETRY FRIDAY ANTHOLOGY FOR SCIENCE - Leigh Ann Eck

Winners - please send me an e-mail to amy at amylv dot com with your address, and I will mail your books sometime this month!  Stay tuned for the exact same giveaway tomorrow and every Saturday of April 2014.

Blog birthday girl Michelle is hosting today's Poetry Friday party over at Today's Little Ditty! Enjoy the festivities during this second beautiful week of National Poetry Month!

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Books - Poem #12 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Thrift Store Bookshelf
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Students - Each day of this month, I sit to write, beginning by asking myself the same question - "Should I write from the clothing department?  The toy department?  Housewares?  Shoes?  Furniture?" I look at my list of already-written poems and see where the collection feels like going.  

Then I try to find an open window of the waiting poem.  "What will let me in? Will I write AS the books, TO the books, ABOUT the books?"

I also think about tone.  "What feeling do I want the poem to have?" This has been interesting throughout THRIFT STORE LIVE so far.  Many days I have felt a nostalgia for these objects, yet I do not want the collection to be a weepy and sad, so I consider how the tone is moving along.  If one poem is a little bit sad, the next one will not be sad.

Then, it's all about words and sounds, and the head scratching and muttering begins.

In the draft below, you can see that I scribbled in my notebook for only nineteen minutes last night before starting typing, but I type-revised for quite a while because once again, I needed a lot of time to work out the ending.

Endings matter.  How you say goodbye - to a friend, to your mom on the phone, to a reader of your poem - matters.

If you are working on a poem, think hard about the ending.  Do not be afraid to rewrite and rewrite.  Will you write a surprise ending?  A circular ending? A funny or emotional ending?  Try to end your poem a couple of different ways. Which way sounds best to you?

Books - Draft Page #1
Photo by Amy LV

What do I like best in today's verse?  I like the way "less than a" repeats three times to create some internal rhythm and sound.

Today, I offer a giveaway of two books here: one copy of THE POETRY FRIDAY ANTHOLOGY FOR SCIENCE compiled by Sylvia Vardell and Janet Wong and one copy of my own FOREST HAS A SONG. Each Saturday of April, I will offer this same giveaway here, for eight books in all.  Thank you to Sylvia and Janet for your generosity.  Please leave a comment below, and I will draw two names next Thursday evening to be announced next Poetry Friday!

For last week's winners, check yesterday's post!

For a fabulous Poetry Peek chock full of ideas for sharing poetrylove with your students, don't miss Thursday's post with librarian Vida Zuljevic.

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Mall Store Shirt - Poem #13 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Mall Store Shirt
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Students - Yesterday I went to two thrift stores to stock up on photographs for the coming week.  It was such fun, but there was one problem.  I was torn between thinking about what to take pictures of...and what to buy.  I ended up taking lots of photos (some of which you will see this week) and buying four books, a cool garden sculpture, and a long sleeved blouse.  Oh, and a garden trowel.  Victory!

I love having a lot of photographs on hand this month.  It makes me realize that it is important to plan for writing by planning for having lots of ideas.  The more interesting (does not mean expensive or exotic) things we do, the more interesting things we will have to write about.  This means that one important part of being a writer is learning to become interested in things and thereby, interesting.

For the photo-taking part of this project, I stroll through thrift stores and just stare at everything.  I listen for things that want their pictures taken.  Somehow I just know which ones they are.  Then, while driving or walking, I choose whichever one is most meaningful to me at the time.  For some reason, this shirt - a very ordinary trendy shirt - rose to the top today.

Today's poem uses the technique of personification, or giving an inanimate or animal object human feelings and abilities.  Shirts don't think or have friends, but in my poetic head, they do.  

So far one of the best parts of this project is realizing that it is possible to come up with a new angle each day. Many of these poems have been complete surprises to me!

Below you can see the longhand draft work for today's verse.  It just got itself rolling.

Mall Store Shirt - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

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Cow Mug - Poem #14 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Cow Mug
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Students - I decided early in the day that today would be "Cow Mug Day." But when it came time to write, I still did not know where to begin.  I did know, though, that writing about a mug was important. Because, you see, no matter which thrift store you visit, you will always find lots of mugs.

More Mugs
Photo by Amy LV

Even More Mugs
Photo by Amy LV

See what I mean?

You can see in the draft below that I began writing by comparing shelves full of mugs to other things. I wrote the first stanza and then moved over to the right side of the draft page below, searching for what the poem should say.

Then, I remembered the field trips that my own fifth grade class used to take with kindergarteners.  We went to a pumpkin farm and we could all pet the animals.  This made me think about how petting cows is everyday life for some children, and for other children, riding the subway is a more everyday experience.  This seemed like a fun avenue to explore.

Cow Mug - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

I wanted this poem to use very simple words and short phrases.  Many times, as in yesterday's "Mall Store Shirt," I write in quite a conversational tone, with one line flowing right into the next.  For today's poem, I kept each sentence more controlled, fitting just the length of each line.  I am not sure why I did this, but I like it.  For me, it makes the poem sound as if it comes from a younger voice, perhaps the first grade voice from the memory.

You might want to consider this with your poems.  What does the voice of your poem sound like? Who do you want to read your poem?  Knowing this will help you think about the voice in which to write.  Write in the voice that matches your reader's ear.  Think of a foot and a shoe.  Your shoe of writing should match the foot of your reader's ear.

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Two Couches - Poem #15 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Living Room Couch
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Family Room Couch
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Students - Today is Day #15 of my THRIFT STORE LIVE project for National Poetry Month, and as it is a day that's a multiple of 5, it is free verse day!  If you look back, you can read the other free verse poems from this month, a way for me to try to strengthen my writing of free verse.


Today's poem is a two voice poem, two voices of two different couches.  We only have one couch in our home - an everything couch - but some people have one fancier couch and one more homey couch.  In today's verse, I try to let those two imagnied personalities shine through.  

Did you notice that the tag lines I use in today's dialogue match the couches' personalities?  While White Couch announces and declares, Orange Couch says and sighs.  What might this tell a reader about the personalities of these two objects, so similar yet so different?

I do like to trace back the family-idea-tree of poems when I write them, and if I were to guess where today's poem originated in my mind, I would say that it came from three mentors: "Famous" by Naomi Shihab Nye (read it here and you will know why), THE BEDSPREAD by Sylvia Fair, and I AM THE DOG I AM THE CAT by Donald Hall.  If you know any of these pieces of literature, you might think about which couch in my poem matches which shoe/person/pet in these pieces.  

It is a great thing to read a lot as each text we read deepens the well we draw from when we write.  We never know when our reading will show up, even in wee ways, in our writing, and so read read read we must!  As Gary Paulsen says, "Read like a wolf eats."

Here is today's longhand draft.  I did a lot of thinking about this throughout the day before writing even one word.  The idea of writing about two couches came to me in the shower yesterday morning, and so much of the thinking hummed along inside of me as I went about the day.  Later, sitting at the keyboard, I decided to indent the stanzas for Orange Couch, to make the different speakers more clear.

Two Couches - Draft Page 1
Photo by Amy LV

Happy happy second half of National Poetry Month!  Listen for poems everywhere...

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Picture Frames - Poem #16 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Students - I wrote today's poem on a late night flight from Atlanta, Georgia back home to Buffalo, NY.  It was a bit dark on the plane, and the gentleman next to me probably thought I was bonkers with all of my muttering (reading aloud to help me write next lines) and tapping (to hear the syllables), but I don't mind that.  I may be a little bonkers!

You can see that I scribbled my way through several pages to arrive at this little verse.  On this first spread, you can see that I first thought of writing the poem in the first person, or 'I' voice.

Picture Frames - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

Below, on the second draft page spread, you see the bulk of the work.  I decided here that I actually wanted the poem to be a bit of a story about lonely frames that wait and finally find their new lives as art gallery frames for a child.

This may be difficult for you to read.  Guess what?  It's difficult for me to read too, but sometimes writing just goes quickly, and one needs to get it down. Neatness can come later.  

By this page spread, I had still not begun work on the ending.

Picture Frames - Draft Page Spread #2
Photo by Amy LV

Draft page spread #3 is where you see the work on the endings.  I also wrote a few endings in my head, endings that never made it to the page.

Picture Frames - Draft Page Spread #3
Photo by Amy LV

And below, in draft page spread #4,  is the last ending work.  After trying many possibilities, I finally decided to end this poem by posing a question to the reader, as one of my favorite poems, "Alley Violinist" by Robert Lax, does.  The end of this poem remains open for conversation.  "What will you find to give a fresh start?

What will YOU find?

Picture Frames - Draft Page Spread #4 
Photo by Amy LV

Please don't miss seventeen-year-old Alex McCarron's great notebooks post over at my other blog, Sharing Our Notebooks.  It's truly inspiring!

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Stuffed Raccoon - Poem #17 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Stuffed Raccoon
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Students - I have been saving this raccoon photograph for several days because I think it is so adorable.  It is actually part of a picture with more stuffed animals, but I just chose one for today's poem.

Three Cute Stuffed Animals
Photo by Amy LV

I was not sure where to begin for today's verse because I did not want to write a too-sad poem.  Even though sometimes I feel a little sad in thrift stores, wondering where all of the people went, I did not want sadness to take me or this collection over.

I dove into my notebook and came up with a poemdraft I liked.

Stuffed Raccoon - Draft Page Spread #1 
Photo by Amy LV

Or so I thought.

First Typed Poemdraft - Done?  No.

Today's post was all done - I thought.  Poem typed.  Poem recorded.  Draft photographed.  It was just to comment.  In doing so, I saw that the poem had a little typo, so I went in to fix it.  Something was bothering me in the poem. Actually three things, but I didn't know that yet.  

The first niggly trouble was that the poem felt just too sad after all.  I do feel sad when I see stuffed animals in thrift stores, but again, I didn't want my occasional melancholy feeling to pervade this collection.  I was going to keep it anyway though, for now, because it was after midnight and I was sleepy.

The second thing that bothered me was that whole part about girls and boys and women and men.  It felt too...too...sophisticated and adult.  I was going to keep it anyway though, for now, because it was after midnight and I was sleepy.

The third thing?  Well, I reread the poem to myself one more time, and something sounded familiar.  Do you know what it was?  

The word 'again.'

I ended April 9th's poem - "Bicycle" - with 'again.' This would not do.  It was back to the drawing board for another ending.  Then another typing.  Another recording.  Even though it was way after midnight and I was sleepy.

Reading my final version for today, above, I noticed something interesting.  The sound of this poem reminds me of the sound of a poem I wrote last year, "Moon Mama."  It has that same rolling sound and the question in the middle and the sense of looking back too.  I read this poem many times aloud on Monday and Tuesday during school visits at St. John's School in Houston, Texas, and the rhythms, reinforced by my voice and through my body, came back in this poem for today.

This is why we read poems aloud over and over and over; they come back to us in surprising ways. 

(Oh!  If you're wondering if I noticed that yesterday's poem includes the word 'small' in its first line, just as today's does, I did notice, and I will likely change that poem's first line to read, "A big box of picture frames...")

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Painting - Poem #18 for April 2014 Poetry Project

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Painting by Dorothy Quinan, 1970
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Students - Yesterday, we went to a biiiig thrift store in downtown Buffalo.  We came home with many goodies, and I took many photographs. This painting made me feel serene and summery, and so I chose to write a haiku to go along with it.  Haiku is a form that I do not attempt often, and so today is a bit unusual for me.

I wanted today's poem to show the contrast between winter in the real world and summer in a painting, where the seasons never change.  With only seventeen syllables, this takes lots of experimenting.  I wanted to show the painting, and so color seemed the best way to do that.  And of course, I always adore simple color words with simple nouns.  

Here in my poemdrafts, you can see many of the possible lines that I tried out and threw out.  If you'd like to read a few tips about writing haiku, check out haiku world.

Picture - Draft Page Spread #1
Photo by Amy LV

And when I finished and sat to type, something felt eerily familiar.  Yes.  The red. And the chickens.  And the gazes (glazed).  I somehow channeled a few words of William Carlos Williams's The Red Wheelbarrow in very few lines and in the same order...without even knowing it.  I tip my hat to you, WCW. Thank you for living in my very blood.  Those mentor poets - they just travel around inside of us all the time.

Painting Close Up
by Dorothy Quinan
Photo by Amy LV

Back of Painting 
by Dorothy Quinan
Photo by Amy LV

Guess what?  I bought a painting.

Me & My New Painting!  
(I bought a frame too!)
Photo by Mark LV

The winner's of last Saturday's book giveaway are:
FOREST HAS A SONG - Linda A.
THE POETRY FRIDAY ANTHOLOGY FOR SCIENCE - Victoria W.

Winners - please send me an e-mail to amy at amylv dot com with your address, and I will mail your books sometime this month!  Stay tuned for the exact same giveaway tomorrow and every Saturday of April 2014.

Robyn Hood Black is hosting today's Poetry Friday festivities over at Life on the Deckle Edge.  All are welcome, and if you'd like to know more about Poetry Friday, read Tabatha Yeatts's great April 2014 explanation over at Savvy Verse & Wit.  Happy Poetry Friday!

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